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re: It is just a sttory....yes, but it's a good one
RNE — (archived)

for a start..........

No agenda, no politics, I just hope y'all liked it- that is all- could have done a lot better with multiple rewrites


I did like it, it does read a spart of a longer story, but most flash (AKA short-shorts) usually does.

You write well RL, you just need practice.

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