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Anyone there look like you, Jody . . . ?

"Some drivers along a busy Fort Worth street on Friday were stopped at a police roadblock and directed into a parking lot, where they were asked by federal contractors for samples of their breath, saliva and even blood."

English 101:

Better:
"Drivers along a busy Fort Worth street on Friday were stopped at a police roadblock and asked for samples of their breath, saliva and even blood. If they agreed to this, they were then directed into a parking lot, where the samples were collected by federal contractors."

That first paragraph is such a minefield.

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