She wrote off the most serious and widespread feminist organization in the first paragraph...
...and didn't mention the Feminist Majority once throughout the rest of the article, preferring to remain ensconced in the fringe of feminist thought. It's like saying, "Except for most of them, Americans are Satanists who sacrifice goats in cemetaries at the new moon."
If she wants to address feminist concerns, it's better to deal with the substance of the movement rather than with the people whose writings are looked at more closely by their opponents than by the women whose side they say they are on.
Regards--
Mary Anne