looks pretty good
Try not to be too cynical Tom. I didn't read the whole thing, but skimmed to areas of interest. This does look very promising to me. Check out Article II for basic rights. You will also probably be very interested in Article III about trade and comerce in the same PDF document.
There are a few things that made the hairs on the back of my neck rise, but for the most part, i think it looks pretty sane.
-Steve G.