Not a bad synopsis alltogether
I mean, I didn't find you really that far off center, but you blew it with your last two lines:
>"Ironically, it is not Islam or illegal border crossers that do the most damage to the west - but it is those westerners who actively work against freedom and do so in the name of "freedom". The silver tongued sirens whose every word beckons the west to dash its ship upon the rocks and drown in a sea of violence, religious domination, poverty and celebrated illiteracy. "
THAT'S a bunch of crap.