Actually, that was not bad.
He made two suggestions:
1. "Shut up". Not the most polite, but we've all used it.
2. "Get an education". Shouldn't we all? ;)
Since RL avoided the name-calling that could very easily have accompanied his suggestions, and may have been present in the original draft in his head, I think he gets points for that. And hey, maybe his left pinky accidentally hit the cap lock key...
