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Re: New SF story - When Leah Was Real

robvg — 8/7/2010 4:58:37 PM (archived)

Don't like the title "amdinistrator of the state"
Too bland even for a beauocracy imo.

On first read, not clear what "transposition" is and not sure if they're both being punished or both undergoing transposition.

some people need things spelled out, some don't

like the twist at the end.

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When Leah Was Real_Removed - Eri - 8/7/2010 1:53:22 PM
- I agree with Ainz - mcfly - 8/14/2010 4:49:34 AM
  - I'll have to look that up. - Eri - 8/14/2010 1:42:34 PM
  - Re: I agree with Ainz - Eri - 8/14/2010 1:41:21 PM
  - and peripherally related... - mcfly - 8/14/2010 5:07:52 AM
- Re: New SF story - When Leah Was Real - Ainz - 8/12/2010 11:39:32 PM
  - Re: Re: New SF story - When Leah Was Real - Eri - 8/13/2010 1:32:29 AM
- Nice work Eri - Frankc - 8/8/2010 7:02:30 PM
  - Thanks, Frank. - Eri - 8/8/2010 7:18:04 PM
    - Re: Re: Thanks, Frank. - Nick_H - 8/13/2010 11:27:49 AM
      - Wonderful interpretation. - Eri - 8/13/2010 4:19:35 PM
      - That's a better interpretation- stunning actually. - RobVG - 8/13/2010 2:44:02 PM
    - Re: Thanks, Frank. - robvg - 8/8/2010 7:31:50 PM
- Interesting - Eri - 8/7/2010 5:26:24 PM
- Re: New SF story - When Leah Was Real - robvg - 8/7/2010 4:58:37 PM

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