Wow...harsh.
That one pulls no punches. It leaves the dems in a bloody heap on the floor.
That's like two cups of Kenya coffee on an empty stomach - too much, too fast.
It's like watching a mauler go over and whup a man in a wheelchair. It's not pretty or picturesque. An unfair match-up.
It's better to leave your opposition laughing at themselves and feeling pathetic than having them burst a blood vessel with hate and an unquenchable desire for revenge. There are enough "Bowsers" out there as it is - we don't need to create more.
;-)
Leave the first half about the scenarios, add just a bit more light humor and call it a day.
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