I Recommend A Writing Class
I don't claim to be an expert writer and hating writing is ranks about even with long hours on plant startups as why I burned out never finished my dissertation, but I think your meandering style makes it hard to make a coherent argument. Then again it also makes it hard to make a coherant counter argument. Was that the plan? I suggest answering one person at a time on one topic at a time. It was difficult to even determine who's comments were whose.
Regards,
Mark